Lori Freeland

The Ins and Outs of Internal Thought  

What your characters don’t say is as crucial as what they do say.     

Internal thought can either add depth to your story and amplify your characters or dilute your wow moments and water down your words. The goal in any novel is to make your readers feel as though they’ve stepped into your character’s body and to let them experience the world through your character’s eyes. Discover how internal thought relates to topics such as deep point of view, dialogue, subtext, tension, pacing, character likeability, character motivation, and story credibility. What goes on inside your character’s head can be a major player in creating their world. Its worth taking the time to perfect.

BIO:

Lori Freeland wrote her first story at age five. It wasn’t good, but it left her with a firm belief that everyone has a story to tell. An author, editor, and writing coach, she lives in the Dallas area, loves good books, happy endings, and the perfect kiss. When she’s not curled up with her dogs drinking too much coffee, she loves to mess with the lives of the imaginary people living in her head.

www.lorifreeland.com

Our speaker for the November 25 meeting (last Saturday in November at the First Presbyterian Church) is our own Laura Drake.

Her Topic: Advanced Craft Workshop!

You know the feeling – when you start a book and immediately suspend disbelief to fall into the story world. As authors, we know that this isn’t easy to do. It takes more than a good scene. It takes a maestro of craft to pull it off.

If you’re past problems with POV, character development and stage direction, this class will help you understand the subtle nuances that can be the difference between a ‘good writer’ and a popular author.

Laura Drake is a hybrid author of Women’s Fiction and Romance. Her debut, The Sweet Spot, won the 2014 Romance Writers of America® RITA® award. She’s since published 14 more books. She is a founding member of Women’s Fiction Writers Assn. and Writers in the Storm blog.

Laura is a city girl who never grew out of her tomboy ways. She gave up the corporate CFO gig to write full time. She realized a lifelong dream of becoming a Texan and is currently working on her accent. She’s a wife, grandmother, and motorcycle chick in the remaining waking hours.

(graphic by George Bowden)

Lori Wilde: https://loriwilde.com/

Leon Dixson will speak at the February 24, 2024 meeting at Hood County Library.

His topic is: “Take Advantage of your Settings.”

Greg Gifford: Firearms In Fiction  – Getting It Right

The three big rules for firearms in your stories are:

Be period correct.

Be capacity correct.

Be performance correct.

Topics to be covered include:

A brief history of firearms in America, what is black powder, what is smokeless powder, what are the various types of rifles, what are the various types of pistols, and what is the National Firearms Act of 1934.

In addition, a short explanation of ballistics will be covered.  Also, how to research a particular firearm.

Some serious historical questions to address. 

• Why did so many criminals have a “Tommy Gun” during the prohibition era?
• Why did the U.S military switch to tiny bullets during the Vietnam era?
• Who were the great gun designers of the 20^th century?
• What emotions do characters feel when they are anticipating using a gun?  What emotions do characters feel when they are engaged in a gun battle / fire fight?  What emotions do characters feel after a battle? These intense experiences are not always the easiest to get down on paper.

Bio for Greg Gifford

Greg graduated from The Ohio State University with a degree in education. He worked the majority of his career in the insurance industry and earned the Chartered Property & Casualty Underwriter designation.

Other teaching pursuits included secondary school Special Education and seminars for adults seeking a license to enter the insurance industry. During his retirement, he also taught English as a Second Language, a challenging and rewarding activity.

When not in front of eager learners, Greg enjoys outdoor pursuits and motor sports. He has hunted small and big game extensively in North America with occasional forays into Africa, South America, and Europe.

Instructing firearms safety and marksmanship are two rewarding and favorite activities. When not punching holes in paper targets or reloading ammunition, Greg enjoys philosophical conversations with his cat, George, who is an attentive listener.