It shows writers what’s working, what’s not working, and what’s missing.

When writers use this five-highlighter system, they see where story momentum starts and stops. Where tension starts and stops. Where the reader may start and stop.

The EDITS System helps writers find a compelling balance of emotion, dialogue, internalizations, tension, setting, description, action, senses, body language, dialogue cues, and more. They learn what works for each specific scene.

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Writers: Bring 5 pages of a work-in-progress. If possible, bring highlighters – yellow, blue, green, and pink. Bring a red pen.